By Eleanor Catton, 2023
Some things in Eleanor Catton’s novel are
clever and well observed, but I found that these broke down in the last third
of the book, where it becomes an action-driven suspense story.
I felt that the first parts of the novel were
like a contemporary Middlemarch (a literary allusion that makes more
sense to me than Macbeth). In the first third of the book, we are introduced to
a range of contemporary characters and their relations to each other and to
their small society. Catton takes readers into their heads as they try to work
out what they want from themselves and from each other. Shelley’s conflicted
feelings toward Mira, Mira’s charismatic leadership undermined by self-doubt, Tony’s
idealistic quest for ideological purity as well as personal recognition make an
interesting setting for an examination of radical personal politics.
I especially liked the comic earnestness
with which the characters in the Birnam Wood collective try to work together to
create the social relationships that they want to see in an ideal society. Naturally,
these conflict with their material conditions under capitalism, with their
emotional lives and with their differing interpretations of their ideals. These
scenes play with such authenticity that I imagine that Catton has lived through
similar experiences herself (as I have, and recognize clearly). Catton’s wit in
describing the scenes and the interactions brings a humour similar to that in Eliot’s
asides in Middlemarch.
Catton goes into a few other characters,
but with much less depth that suggest she is filling out a few stereotypes
rather than creating living characters. Owen and Jill are plausible as good-hearted
New Zealanders who have build up a small fortune in business, but we don’t know
anything about their business practices, and that’s relevant here. Robert
Lemoine as the socially charming, sociopathic billionaire is provided with
childhood trauma to twist his psyche, but it doesn’t get him beyond stereotypes.
Mira shares some of Robert’s manipulative traits, but not his skill or
self-confidence. And the humorous insight that Catton brings to the Birnam Wood
group is absent here.
So the suspense builds in the second third of
the novel when ambitious, idealistic Tony works out Lemoine’s world-dominating plot.
It goes full paranoid in the last third, and over the top in the last dozen
pages. The suspense-movie plot takes over the psychosocial drama, although
Catton makes a valiant effort to pull the characters’ psyches to the front. Mira
is relieved when she realizes that if the Birnam Wood ideal blows up, it absolves
her of responsibility. Jill goes back to her New Zealand self-reliance to
protect her home from the evil (American) intruder. Does Catton intend it to be
meaningful when the nouveau bourgeois has to defeat the superrich billionaire
to save her world? Does Tony survive through his determination, idealism and
backwoods skills? It’s all a bit confused by the end.
Catton gives realism and texture to the
story in the details of everyday life, as she did with the details of frontier
life in her historical novel, The Luminaries. She highlights the communications
technology that has become both a tool and a trap in contemporary life. The
useful, but slightly creepy, location tracking that Shelley uses to keep touch
with Mira becomes a life-threatening danger in the hands of a malevolent
techie. Yet it is central to plans of both the idealist and the sociopath. This,
I would say, is a more likely threat to society than the private ambitions of
one billionaire, although Catton doesn’t take the story in this direction.
I had a similar response to reading this
novel as I did to The Luminaries – it started out interesting and
intriguing, but become rushed and less interesting by the end.